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some dance to remember
she rests her head in her hands
wet with tears
coursing through her fingers
shoulders that shiver
shaking in pain/regret
unwilling to let go
she lingers on
they hold her world
caught in brokeness
and beneath the neon glow
of monitors
and television screens
shining in empty store windows
she spreads her arms
inclusive
a reality that hurts too much
let the falling rain
cold and alone
wash across this shiv'ring child
her feet stepping 'cross cobblestones
turning round in circles
hair sticking in threads
as she dances to remember
she dances to forget
closing her eyes
she dreads the future
may 24, 2002
2:05 am
some dance to remember
she rests her head in her hands
wet with tears
coursing through her fingers
shoulders that shiver
shaking in pain/regret
unwilling to let go
she lingers on
they hold her world
caught in brokeness
and beneath the neon glow
of monitors
and television screens
shining in empty store windows
she spreads her arms
inclusive
a reality that hurts too much
let the falling rain
cold and alone
wash across this shiv'ring child
her feet stepping 'cross cobblestones
turning round in circles
hair sticking in threads
as she dances to remember
she dances to forget
closing her eyes
she dreads the future
may 24, 2002
2:05 am
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this was inspired in part by a long conversation this evening with an anonymous person ('cause i chose to make them anonymous) though it really has nothing to do with what we talked about...it made me think of a fictional situation...and if you look closely..i even used a little bit o' rhyme (and of course there is a pattern...though it may be hard to find...)
//spunj13
//spunj13
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So descriptive... Very emotional.. Well written. I can picture it. So sad... *goes off to cry in her corner*