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snowfall
she dances
in the falling snow
arms outstretched
face upturned
to catch the flake on her waiting tongue
a white wall of beauty
washing away
the dimness of a barren winter
'round and 'round she spins
all cares forgotten
in the moment
for just a speck of happiness
in this dark and troubled world
and her eyes sparkle
with a tiny shred of resignation
from the troubles of her life
ever spinning 'round
until
tired
she falls
to the freshly patterned earth
sinking into the cold arms
of winter
and separation
from time
and space
falls upon her
with the snow
february 26, 2002
1:00 pm
she dances
in the falling snow
arms outstretched
face upturned
to catch the flake on her waiting tongue
a white wall of beauty
washing away
the dimness of a barren winter
'round and 'round she spins
all cares forgotten
in the moment
for just a speck of happiness
in this dark and troubled world
and her eyes sparkle
with a tiny shred of resignation
from the troubles of her life
ever spinning 'round
until
tired
she falls
to the freshly patterned earth
sinking into the cold arms
of winter
and separation
from time
and space
falls upon her
with the snow
february 26, 2002
1:00 pm
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a completely fictional work about someone dancing in a snow storm
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Man you had a productive night !! Like this one best of all great imagery puts me there watching her. Love the forlorn feel and the last eight lines..."She falls
To the freshly patterned earth
Sinking into the cold arms
Of winter
and seperation
from time
and space
falls upon her
With the snow"...Just blow me away.
Nice work.
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Dreaming as the summer dies
To the freshly patterned earth
Sinking into the cold arms
Of winter
and seperation
from time
and space
falls upon her
With the snow"...Just blow me away.
Nice work.
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Dreaming as the summer dies