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evenflow

i strain against these bonds
      (arms chained)
as your fingers rake across my flesh
lips whisp’ring
      wet and lucid
upon my chest
sending silent fury to my limbs
i struggle against these bonds
desire feeding upon your taunts

and hungrily
      you lick your lips
      pausing
           (for a moment)
before
      inch by inch
you pull at the cloth
      revealing your skin

s l o w l y
t o r t u r o u s l y

the fabric leaves your body
      exposing stomach
           and perfection
      (your shapely arms that flow across my being)
      uncovering well-formed thighs
      beautiful and exposed
           only a translucent piece of material between us
and with each second the hunger grows

      to taste your skin
      to feel your body against mine

then your fingers dance across my thighs
      rising to my chest
      to my face
           (caressing my anxious existence)
and the craving rages hotter
      struggling against these chains

you wrap your legs around my head
      my hunger tearingatthecloththatseparatesus
tasting you
      feeling you
      needing you
as your fingers grip my neck
pulling me in
      basking in your warmth
evenflow

      (release)




september 26, 2002
2:56 pm
:iconspunj13:
hmm... i don't usually participate in the poetry contests, but i got the most interesting idea for this one. for those of you who know me... isn't this frightening? ha... or as they say ...tmi...

honestly though...this is all from my imagination... i have never been in this situation (maybe someday)...

//spunj13
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Given 2002-10-05
I'm not even to quote any of the lines from erotica challenge - spunj13 by spunj13. I don't want to spoil the story. *grins* Go. Now. It's worth it. (Selected by +euphoria) ( Featured by °euphoria )
:iconpolarpattie:
wow...wow...that is all i can say. good job!
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:iconczn:
awwwwwww... great poem!
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:icondefyjane:
~defyjane Dec 2, 2002  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love I very much liked this peice...I usually don't comment on poetry because a lot of times I cannot feel what the poet is feeling, but in this poem, oh boy lol, i felt it all. This is one of the best erotic poems I've ever read. I also really like the form, very creative, really unique. great job, keep it up ;-) (Wink)
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:iconselene:
wow...i finaly read this poem and now i know that i should have read it along time ago. sooooo very awesome! something you defietely shouldn't be reading in class.
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:iconsheeps:
Pearl jam is a good band ;) (Wink)
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:icondrd69:
talk about getting what you deserve!!
very, VERY good.
very nice indeed.
love the... fearless descriptions.
respect.
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:iconpiccolonamek:
*takes a breath*

Erotic and hot. :d
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:iconotter1:
man... that is damn hot... i need a glass of water after that build up... beautifully versed and i love the form. Great work.
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:iconduo-maxwell:
:o (Eek) quite interesting!

I don't usually look at eroctic poems.. but this one was good!

nice work Aww
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:iconfae13:
o h m y g a w d .


* s i g h *



*lites a cigarette*


yeeeooowers !
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