i strain against these bonds
(arms chained)
as your fingers rake across my flesh
lips whisp’ring
wet and lucid
upon my chest
sending silent fury to my limbs
i struggle against these bonds
desire feeding upon your taunts
and hungrily
you lick your lips
pausing
(for a moment)
before
inch by inch
you pull at the cloth
revealing your skin
s l o w l y
t o r t u r o u s l y
the fabric leaves your body
exposing stomach
and perfection
(your shapely arms that flow across my being)
uncovering well-formed thighs
beautiful and exposed
only a translucent piece of material between us
and with each second the hunger grows
to taste your skin
to feel your body against mine
then your fingers dance across my thighs
rising to my chest
to my face
(caressing my anxious existence)
and the craving rages hotter
struggling against these chains
you wrap your legs around my head
my hunger tearingatthecloththatseparatesus
tasting you
feeling you
needing you
as your fingers grip my neck
pulling me in
basking in your warmth
evenflow
hmm... i don't usually participate in the poetry contests, but i got the most interesting idea for this one. for those of you who know me... isn't this frightening? ha... or as they say ...tmi...
honestly though...this is all from my imagination... i have never been in this situation (maybe someday)...
I very much liked this peice...I usually don't comment on poetry because a lot of times I cannot feel what the poet is feeling, but in this poem, oh boy lol, i felt it all. This is one of the best erotic poems I've ever read. I also really like the form, very creative, really unique. great job, keep it up
wow...i finaly read this poem and now i know that i should have read it along time ago. sooooo very awesome! something you defietely shouldn't be reading in class.
very, VERY good.
very nice indeed.
love the... fearless descriptions.
respect.
Erotic and hot. :d
I don't usually look at eroctic poems.. but this one was good!
nice work
* s i g h *
*lites a cigarette*
yeeeooowers !