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boseiai


there have been an ocean of heartbeats
set deep
within your chest
pounding out a tuneless song

from sunrise
a child's feet wet upon the sand
tentative
      anxious
           s - t (stumble) e - p
           to
           st - ep
      (hands waiting just within reach)
until the first steps
patterned
      steady
walkingshufflingrunning
left and right
right and left

      (hands always waiting just within reach)

scraped knees
shed tears
      and
broken promises

and the child ages
spreading wings
morning heat breaking on the waves
stretching limbs
      reaching for the sky
and the years pass as moments

      (hands still waiting)

and the beat continues
      silent
      persistent
           never wavering
      and the wind whispers
with the voice of máithreachas

      I'll love you forever
      I'll love you for always
      As long as I'm living
      My baby you'll be





      (hands always waiting



           just within reach)
















may 10, 2009
10:37 am
©2009 `spunj13
:iconspunj13:

Author's Comments

i haven't written in months.
possibly years.
and i was laying about today listening to NPR and thought of my mother.
this isn't strange, as NPR always reminds me of my mother (despite it being mother's day today)

we are fairly close.
and even though we live about a thousand miles apart...
sometimes the emotional bond is palpable.
i felt that this morning.

so i wrote this poem.

i might try to start writing again.
get back into shape.

i apologize is this comes across as ...well... crap.
i'm out of practice and i've been up since yesterday sometime.
just thinking about napping now.

in case anybody was wondering...the title is
boseiai. which translates to "mother's love" in japanese.
i also use the word máithreachas, which, roughly translated ... means "mothering" in (irish) gaelic.


[spunj13]

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:icongeobyte:
In all the years I've had you on my watch list, it's always such a treat when you put out a piece of writing. This is so far from "crap" whether you are out of practice or not. It puts such a beautiful, flooring image in my mind. And the feeling of being so close, even though physically far, I can relate to wholeheartedly.

I hope you do start to write and share more, 'cause I have always loved it.
:iconspunj13:
thank you SO much for the kind words.
they really mean a lot.

i found (very recently) that i really do miss writing.
it's been more than 3 years since i wrote consistently. (i used to average at least one poem a day)
i'm going to try and do that again.

[spunj13]

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your style seems the same. that was somewhat comforting when it needed to be... don't take that as gay ;-)

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:iconasheneyed:
i like that idea very much.

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:iconthetaoofchaos:
obvious sentimentality can be difficult to render poetically without seeming saccharine. but this is wonderfully crafted.

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i agree with geobyte. this is so far from crap. this piece emits the tenderest of feelings but it leaves me feeling so wistful and sad towards the end. i love the second stanza - i pictured my mom doing so to me when i was younger.

i lost my mom to cancer last year...i still miss her. i'm glad you uploaded this on Mother's Day...nevermind that i believe mothers should not be celebrated only on a designated day :)

hope you're well.

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I am simply going to say that this is wonderful.

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